Kia ora Bloggers, Isaac here This post is about volcanos me and my friends Felix and Leo made a news report about it I think its good. What do you think. Blog Ya Later.
Kia ora Isaac. Your story has me hooked! I feel like I need more information though. It would be great if you could add more of the why and how information. Great start!
Kia Ora Isaac, Wow imagine if Mt Everest was an active volcano, there would be so many people that would need to move to safety, I wonder where they would go? Good start on your article, a little tip-remember that proper nouns (the names of people/places) have capitals, so it would be Mount Everest.
Kia ora Isaac. Your story has me hooked! I feel like I need more information though. It would be great if you could add more of the why and how information. Great start!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Isaac, Wow imagine if Mt Everest was an active volcano, there would be so many people that would need to move to safety, I wonder where they would go?
ReplyDeleteGood start on your article, a little tip-remember that proper nouns (the names of people/places) have capitals, so it would be Mount Everest.