Kia ora Bloggers, this is my 100 word story about coin operated if you have not seen the video here it is Coin Operated if you have just carry on. I went a bit over the 100 word rule but it was the best I could do. Have you ever had to make a story in 100 words? Blog Ya Later.
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Walking down the street with my mum I saw a coin operated rocket ship. I looked at my mum and she looked back. I ran and sat down on the seat. I reached into my pocket and grabbed my money, put my helmet on and gave my mum a strong salute and pressed the button it pointed at the sky and then started bobbing up and down. I was so upset then I saw a poster with lemons on it and I knew what I had to do. I got all the supplies and started a lemonade stand years past soon I was an old man. I had made millions I picked up the bag of money and took it to the rocket tipped it in and sat down hit the button and blasted to space. I felt like a little kid again. |
Hi Isaac
ReplyDeleteIt is always a challenge with a limited amount of words so well done. I really like the way you described saluting your mum, it really brought the description of your departure to life.
Hey Isaac Long time see, Its been years sense this whole thing started and I don't know how much longer I've got so Im leave this comment.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Isaac Felix here, I liken your story because it tells me a story and I can picture it in my mind. Its fun to read and I hope you inspire more kids like you inspired me today. Blog Ya Later
Arch arch im im bla. Felix fell from a high place
Hi Felix, Thanks for that it was very nice. Next time hope you save and exit so you don't fall.Blog Ya Later Isaac.
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