Nice job, boys, I especially like your volcano haikus, my favourite type of poetry because you have to make every word count and they're quick to write.
Kia ora Isaac. Great work working collaboratively with the others and getting your work up on your blog quickly. We may just have to have another look at your word choices in the haiku's though as some of them don't follow the 5-7-5 syllable structure. Some good word choice to get a lot of meaning across in only a few words.
Kia ora Isaac, Felix & Leo - this work is a great example of Learn, Create, Share - tino pai! There are some great word choices throughout the different poems which tell me you have learnt a lot about volcanoes. The syllable count for haiku can be tricky. You can check how many syllables are in a word by going to: https://syllablecounter.net/ I look forward to seeing more of your work. Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
I enjoyed reading your poems, Isaac (and Felix and Leo). Great tip from Miss Whysall about using syllablecounter.net. I'll look forward to reading more of your poems!
Nice job, boys, I especially like your volcano haikus, my favourite type of poetry because you have to make every word count and they're quick to write.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Isaac. Great work working collaboratively with the others and getting your work up on your blog quickly. We may just have to have another look at your word choices in the haiku's though as some of them don't follow the 5-7-5 syllable structure. Some good word choice to get a lot of meaning across in only a few words.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Isaac, Felix & Leo - this work is a great example of Learn, Create, Share - tino pai! There are some great word choices throughout the different poems which tell me you have learnt a lot about volcanoes.
ReplyDeleteThe syllable count for haiku can be tricky. You can check how many syllables are in a word by going to: https://syllablecounter.net/
I look forward to seeing more of your work. Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
I enjoyed reading your poems, Isaac (and Felix and Leo). Great tip from Miss Whysall about using syllablecounter.net. I'll look forward to reading more of your poems!
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